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@@ -1546,15 +1546,7 @@ for now.
 
 \emph{James.}
 
-\chapter{*Chapter 3*: Spiders on a Dead
-Web}\label{chapter-3-spiders-on-a-dead-web}
-
-Thank you for all the reviews yesterday!
-
-This is more of a `building-up-steam' chapter, but I hope you enjoy it
-anyway.
-
-\textbf{Chapter Two: Spiders on a Dead Web}
+\chapter{Spiders on a Dead Web}\label{chapter-3-spiders-on-a-dead-web}
 
 ``Dad, why doesn't Lux Aeterna have house elves?''
 
@@ -2419,8 +2411,7 @@ goblins and the Tonks instead. He felt a pleasant tingle of excitement.
 
 \emph{Finally, I'm going to be doing something.}
 
-\chapter{*Chapter 4*: Griphook Fishbaggin's
-Legacy}\label{chapter-4-griphook-fishbaggins-legacy}
+\chapter{Griphook Fishbaggin's Legacy}\label{chapter-4-griphook-fishbaggins-legacy}
 
 Thank you for the reviews lately!
 
@@ -3323,15 +3314,7 @@ him and holding him like a fly in amber.
 And then the goblins whirled aside, and Bellatrix Lestrange's first hex
 came at him, and he had no time for anything other than battle.
 
-\chapter{*Chapter 5*: Battles in
-Conversation}\label{chapter-5-battles-in-conversation}
-
-Thank you for the reviews on the last chapter! And yes, I know this
-chapter is early. This is because I do not know when to stop writing.
-
-The poem Rosier quotes is Tennyson's ``Ulysses.''
-
-\textbf{Chapter Four: Battles In Conversation}
+\chapter{Battles in Conversation}\label{chapter-5-battles-in-conversation}
 
 Harry felt his shoulder all but crunch on the sand as he avoided
 Bellatrix's first hex. He felt his heart hammering in his ears, heard
@@ -4095,18 +4078,11 @@ he would write. \emph{Only until a better solution can be found, and
 James and Lily and Albus all together can be made to pay for their
 crimes.}
 
-\chapter{*Chapter 6*: Interlude: And Then There Were
-More}\label{chapter-6-interlude-and-then-there-were-more}
+\chapter{Interlude: And Then There Were More}\label{chapter-6-interlude-and-then-there-were-more}
 
-Thank you for the reviews on Chapter 4!
+\noindent \emph{July 31st, 1994}
 
-And there was this Interlude!
-
-\textbf{Interlude: And Then There Were More Letters}
-
-\emph{July 31st, 1994}
-
-\emph{Potter:}
+\noindent \emph{Potter:}
 
 I must congratulate you on finding an original way to try and get your
 son killed. Quite ingenious, really, to have him employ his magic
@@ -4137,11 +4113,9 @@ begins.
 
 \emph{Professor Severus Snape.}
 
-\emph{}
-
 \begin{center}\rule{0.5\linewidth}{\linethickness}\end{center}
 
-\emph{August 1st, 1994}
+\noindent \emph{August 1st, 1994}
 
 \emph{Snape:}
 
@@ -4443,8 +4417,7 @@ been happy.
 
 \emph{Harry.}
 
-\chapter{*Chapter 7*: Never Trust a
-Rosier}\label{chapter-7-never-trust-a-rosier}
+\chapter{Never Trust a Rosier}\label{chapter-7-never-trust-a-rosier}
 
 Thank you for all the reviews on the chapter yesterday! And here is this
 one, which is a massive thing.
@@ -5584,14 +5557,7 @@ It was obviously a night for breaking things, and in the end Snape
 destroyed several dozen of the figures before he trusted himself enough
 to put his wand away and go to bed.
 
-\chapter{*Chapter 8*: Ministry on the
-Rise}\label{chapter-8-ministry-on-the-rise}
-
-Thank you for all the reviews yesterday!
-
-And here we go, with another `spinning-the-threads' chapter.
-
-\textbf{Chapter Six: Ministry on the Rise}
+\chapter{Ministry on the Rise}\label{chapter-8-ministry-on-the-rise}
 
 ``Here. Drink this.''
 
@@ -6317,15 +6283,7 @@ in him again, hatching like dragons.
 if it ever was. This is about winning in general, and winning the
 future.}
 
-\chapter{*Chapter 9*: Who Speaks to the
-Many?}\label{chapter-9-who-speaks-to-the-many}
-
-Thank you for the reviews yesterday!
-
-In other news, the story has acquired at least one new chapter, because
-of the twist at the end of this chapter. Damn.
-
-\textbf{Chapter Seven: Who Speaks to the Many?}
+\chapter{Who Speaks to the Many?}\label{chapter-9-who-speaks-to-the-many}
 
 ``I promise you, Harry, I had nothing to do with this.''
 
@@ -7049,13 +7007,7 @@ forward and gripped Harry's shoulder. ``I'm afraid not.''
 And then he went into Side Along Apparition, dragging Harry with him,
 cutting off Snape's angry roar as they went.
 
-\chapter{*Chapter 10*: The Hounds}\label{chapter-10-the-hounds}
-
-Thank you for all the reviews yesterday!
-
-A warning: this is not a very \emph{nice} chapter.
-
-\textbf{Chapter Eight: The Hounds}
+\chapter{The Hounds}\label{chapter-10-the-hounds}
 
 Harry came out of the Apparition with his stomach jolting, but with
 Regulus whispering in his head, \emph{You're somewhere in the Ministry.
@@ -7654,16 +7606,7 @@ enraged about what they had done to \emph{him.}
 He advanced on Umbridge, and his magic woke and filled the room like a
 storm.
 
-\chapter{*Chapter 11*: A Kind of Wild
-Justice}\label{chapter-11-a-kind-of-wild-justice}
-
-Thank you for all the reviews yesterday!
-
-Warning: This chapter is very dark.
-
-The title comes from a quote by Sir Francis Bacon.
-
-\textbf{Chapter Nine: A Kind of Wild Justice}
+\chapter{A Kind of Wild Justice}\label{chapter-11-a-kind-of-wild-justice}
 
 Harry didn't know the part of himself that woke as he stepped forward
 and fixed his gaze on Umbridge.
@@ -8602,15 +8545,7 @@ destruction.}
 
 He met Skeeter's eyes. ``When do we go to press?''
 
-\chapter{*Chapter 12*: Alliance and
-Defiance}\label{chapter-12-alliance-and-defiance}
-
-\textbf{Thank you for the reviews yesterday!}
-
-And, oh, \emph{look}, another chapter not in the original outline. (This
-story keeps on growing).
-
-\textbf{Chapter Ten: Alliance and Defiance}
+\chapter{Alliance and Defiance}\label{chapter-12-alliance-and-defiance}
 
 A year since her first transformation. A year since her first full moon.
 
@@ -9343,14 +9278,7 @@ It was all she could do not to howl.
 
 The future was near, and it had never looked better.
 
-\chapter{*Chapter 13*: Interlude: Minister
-Illegally}\label{chapter-13-interlude-minister-illegally}
-
-Thank you for all the reviews/responses to the previous chapter!
-
-And here's Rita's article.
-
-\textbf{Interlude: Minister Illegally Kidnaps Child}
+\chapter{Interlude: Minister Illegally}\label{chapter-13-interlude-minister-illegally}
 
 \textbf{\emph{{The Daily Prophet}}}
 
@@ -9510,16 +9438,7 @@ fourteen-year-old from his guardian. But I'm sure they do. After all,
 Minister Fudge is the Minister of Magic, and ultimately accountable to
 the whole of wizarding Britain, not just one young wizard.''
 
-\chapter{*Chapter 14*: Stung Into
-Storm}\label{chapter-14-stung-into-storm}
-
-Thank you for the reviews on both the chapter and the interlude
-yesterday!
-
-The title of this chapter comes from a line in Swinburne's poem
-``Hesperia.''
-
-\textbf{Chapter Eleven: Stung Into Storm}
+\chapter{Stung Into Storm}\label{chapter-14-stung-into-storm}
 
 Harry sighed and sat back, flexing his hand slowly open. It hurt from
 the long time he'd spent gripping the quill, more so than the time he'd
@@ -10247,20 +10166,7 @@ Harry had time to give her a smile and step away from her before
 someone's hand clasped him firmly on the shoulder, a clasp just this
 side of pain, and an unfamiliar voice said, ``What's this, then?''
 
-\chapter{*Chapter 15*: The Old
-Mastiff}\label{chapter-15-the-old-mastiff}
-
-Thank you for the reviews yesterday!
-
-This is just a notice that after Chapter 13, I may not be able to update
-for a few days, as I'll be moving and I don't know for certain if my new
-apartment has Internet access. If not, then I'll simply continue writing
-the chapters and post several of them in a row when I get Internet set
-up.
-
-Enjoy this chapter!
-
-\textbf{Chapter Twelve: The Old Mastiff}
+\chapter{The Old Mastiff}\label{chapter-15-the-old-mastiff}
 
 Harry turned with the grip on his shoulder, gaze fixing on the man who
 stood over him. He tried, automatically, to meet the man's eyes, but
@@ -11939,14 +11845,7 @@ about being \emph{vates}. But if that did not work\ldots{}
 
 \emph{Well, another distraction should.}
 
-\chapter{*Chapter 17*: My Responses Have
-Claws}\label{chapter-17-my-responses-have-claws}
-
-Thank you for the reviews yesterday!
-
-And here is a spiky chapter in which no one is honest.
-
-\textbf{Chapter Fourteen: My Responses Have Claws}
+\chapter{My Responses Have Claws}\label{chapter-17-my-responses-have-claws}
 
 Harry considered, later, that he had had no responsibility for the world
 going mad that particular morning, even though it came about as
@@ -12560,15 +12459,7 @@ now, tugging him on.
 \emph{to see me for what I am---just as powerful and just as worthy as
 he is.}
 
-\chapter{*Chapter 18*: Interlude: From Melinda and
-Hellebore}\label{chapter-18-interlude-from-melinda-and-hellebore}
-
-Thank you for the reviews on the last chapter! Boy, talk about
-explosive.
-
-And the plot just got more complicated again. Hi.
-
-\textbf{Interlude: From Melinda and Hellebore}
+\chapter{Interlude: From Melinda and Hellebore}\label{chapter-18-interlude-from-melinda-and-hellebore}
 
 \textbf{\emph{{The Daily Prophet}}}
 
@@ -12669,18 +12560,13 @@ Have a wonderful day, and a very happy late summer to you!
 
 \emph{Hellebore Shiverwood.}
 
-\chapter{*Chapter 19*: He Will Have Cause to
-Regret}\label{chapter-19-he-will-have-cause-to-regret}
-
-Thank you for the reviews yesterday!
-
-\textbf{Chapter Fifteen: He Will Have Cause to Regret}
+\chapter{He Will Have Cause to Regret}\label{chapter-19-he-will-have-cause-to-regret}
 
 Snape gently dipped the tip of his quill into the off-white potion. In a
 moment, the liquid had clung to it, and he was ready to write his letter
 to James Potter. He nodded, and sat down to compose.
 
-\emph{Potter:}
+\noindent \emph{Potter:}
 
 \emph{I suppose you imagine that you can best me this way, that you will
 take Harry away from me in a legal battle. I would ask you to look
@@ -13322,17 +13208,7 @@ as everyone else in my thinking, and deserve the same consideration.}
 
 \emph{I just want them to be happy.}
 
-\chapter{*Chapter 20*: On This Day of
-Balance}\label{chapter-20-on-this-day-of-balance}
-
-Thank you for the reviews yesterday!
-
-Note: This chapter is evil.
-
-The lines of poetry quoted in this chapter come from Swinburne's ``A
-Nympholept.''
-
-\textbf{Chapter Sixteen: On This Day of Balance}
+\chapter{On This Day of Balance}\label{chapter-20-on-this-day-of-balance}
 
 ``James, I wish you wouldn't do this.''
 
@@ -14014,15 +13890,7 @@ Harry lay with his head on the table, panting, trying desperately to
 soothe the jumbled pain in his head, and hang on to his sanity, and
 figure out what in the hell had just happened.
 
-\chapter{*Chapter 21*: Not So Private
-Lessons}\label{chapter-21-not-so-private-lessons}
-
-Thank you for the reviews on the last chapter!
-
-This one was fun to write. No one is \emph{correct}, but they are
-\emph{fun.}
-
-\textbf{Chapter Seventeen: Not-So-Private Lessons}
+\chapter{Not So Private Lessons}\label{chapter-21-not-so-private-lessons}
 
 \emph{Regulus?}
 
@@ -14717,18 +14585,11 @@ I'll fail again---I'll correct myself. This is for the best.}
 doesn't find out about the way I'm going to reverse the potion against
 James. He'll only be angry if he finds out.}
 
-\chapter{*Chapter 22*: Interlude: Answers to the
-Calling}\label{chapter-22-interlude-answers-to-the-calling}
+\chapter{Interlude: Answers to the Calling}\label{chapter-22-interlude-answers-to-the-calling}
 
-Thank you for the reviews yesterday!
+\noindent \emph{Malfoy Manor}
 
-Interlude yay! The formal chapter will follow in a while.
-
-\textbf{Interlude: Answers to the Calling}
-
-\emph{Malfoy Manor}
-
-\emph{September 22nd, 1994}
+\noindent \emph{September 22nd, 1994}
 
 Dear allies (for so I hope I may call you, though the link we share is
 Harry Potter and not anything more formal):
@@ -14754,13 +14615,12 @@ Awaiting your response,
 
 \emph{Lucius Malfoy.}
 
-\emph{}
 
 \begin{center}\rule{0.5\linewidth}{\linethickness}\end{center}
 
-\emph{Wyvern's Nest}
+\noindent \emph{Wyvern's Nest}
 
-\emph{September 24th, 1994}
+\noindent \emph{September 24th, 1994}
 
 Dear Lucius:
 
@@ -14778,7 +14638,6 @@ Eagerly awaiting enlightenment,
 
 \emph{Arabella Zabini.}
 
-\emph{}
 
 \begin{center}\rule{0.5\linewidth}{\linethickness}\end{center}
 
@@ -14971,13 +14830,7 @@ several years, after all.
 
 \emph{Acies Lestrange.}
 
-\chapter{*Chapter 23*: Never Underestimate a House
-Elf}\label{chapter-23-never-underestimate-a-house-elf}
-
-And this is the start of a new plot direction, as I just revised the
-story outline again last night.
-
-\textbf{Chapter Eighteen: Never Underestimate a House Elf}
+\chapter{Never Underestimate a House Elf}\label{chapter-23-never-underestimate-a-house-elf}
 
 Harry stamped his feet and shivered. He had never realized it was so
 immensely \emph{cold} in the dungeons at night. Then again, he was
@@ -15599,13 +15452,7 @@ If only the damn, dim remnant of the phoenix song would stop echoing in
 the room, and the sensation that he was making a mistake would stop
 echoing in his brain.
 
-\chapter{*Chapter 24*: Delegation}\label{chapter-24-delegation}
-
-Thanks for the reviews yesterday!
-
-This chapter sets a bunch of clocks ticking in the background.
-
-\textbf{Chapter Nineteen: Delegation}
+\chapter{Delegation}\label{chapter-24-delegation}
 
 ``Attention, students. Can I have your attention, if you please?''
 
@@ -16950,8 +16797,7 @@ front.}
 
 And if he didn't hurry, he would be late to Charms, anyway.
 
-\chapter{*Chapter 26*: To Be
-Slytherin}\label{chapter-26-to-be-slytherin}
+\chapter{To Be Slytherin}\label{chapter-26-to-be-slytherin}
 
 \textbf{PLEASE NOTE: This is Chapter 21, not 20. Yes, I know there were
 problems getting to Chapter 20, ``Cry Havoc,'' yesterday. Yes, I did
@@ -17695,15 +17541,7 @@ his idiocy. Against a Light wizard, Light dances.}
 
 \emph{I do not see why this lesson is so hard to understand.}
 
-\chapter{*Chapter 27*: And Unleash the Dogs of
-War}\label{chapter-27-and-unleash-the-dogs-of-war}
-
-Thank you for the reviews yesterday!
-
-And this is actually a nice and mostly non-angsty chapter. Don't worry;
-the angst will be back pretty soon.
-
-\textbf{Chapter 22: And Unleash The Dogs of War}
+\chapter{And Unleash the Dogs of War}\label{chapter-27-and-unleash-the-dogs-of-war}
 
 James folded his arms, bowed his head forward on his desk, and left it
 there.
@@ -18355,20 +18193,7 @@ malevolently at him.
 Harry narrowed his eyes at it. \emph{I'm going to get rid of you, too,
 see if I don't.}
 
-\chapter{*Chapter 28*: Dancers in the
-Light}\label{chapter-28-dancers-in-the-light}
-
-Thank you for the reviews on the last chapter!
-
-Yes, this chapter is early. That's because I have an inconvenient
-schedule tomorrow- er, today. Also, this is angsty.
-
-Look quick, and you might catch a hint of Harry's future Animagus form.
-
-The lines Rosier quotes in this chapter come from Swinburne's
-``Dolores.''
-
-\textbf{Chapter Twenty-Three: Dancers In the Light}
+\chapter{Dancers in the Light}\label{chapter-28-dancers-in-the-light}
 
 ``You're still taking a risk.''
 
@@ -19064,17 +18889,7 @@ and accepting help isn't the same thing as abandoning your duty.}
 
 Harry washed the blood off his scar, brushed his teeth, and went to bed.
 
-\chapter{*Chapter 29*: Open Unto Me}\label{chapter-29-open-unto-me}
-
-Thank you for the reviews on the last chapter!
-
-Sorry for a later update than normal, but later start than normal +
-longer chapter than normal not a good combination.
-
-This chapter is dark, and Dark, and has some seeds in it that are going
-to take a while to blossom. That's the way it's meant to be.
-
-\textbf{Chapter Twenty-Four: Open Unto Me}
+\chapter{Open Unto Me}\label{chapter-29-open-unto-me}
 
 Minerva closed her eyes and bowed her head. It was the only weakness she
 would allow herself, these five minutes alone in her office, before she
@@ -20491,16 +20306,7 @@ would.
 \emph{Harry will thank me for this at the end of the year, I'm sure of
 it.}
 
-\chapter{*Chapter 31*: Interlude: The Sea in
-Storm}\label{chapter-31-interlude-the-sea-in-storm}
-
-Thank you for the reviews on the last chapter!
-
-This is an interlude that sets up Chapter 27. The next chapter, which
-should be up in a few hours, is the first of three taking place on
-Halloween.
-
-\textbf{Interlude: The Sea in Storm}
+\chapter{Interlude: The Sea in Storm}\label{chapter-31-interlude-the-sea-in-storm}
 
 \emph{The Sanctuary}
 
@@ -21911,17 +21717,7 @@ ears ring and his body clench.
 listening, and gathered himself, and \emph{jumped}, pushing against the
 anti-Apparition wards as he headed straight to Draco's side.
 
-\chapter{*Chapter 34*: Julia Malfoy}\label{chapter-34-julia-malfoy}
-
-Thank you for the reviews on the last chapter!
-
-This is being posted early, because there will be no chapter tomorrow.
-There is also no cliffhanger on this chapter, yay. It was a hard one to
-write, so\ldots{}enjoy.
-
-Introducing Draco's introduction to reality.
-
-\textbf{Chapter Twenty-Eight: Julia Malfoy}
+\chapter{Julia Malfoy}\label{chapter-34-julia-malfoy}
 
 Draco nodded decisively, and stood. One hand fingered the vials of dark
 potion in his pocket, but he quickly pulled it away and folded it
@@ -23616,12 +23412,7 @@ see him, and the way his hand shook.
 
 It was the only way he got through the letter.
 
-\chapter{*Chapter 36*: Interlude: The Hardest
-Letter}\label{chapter-36-interlude-the-hardest-letter}
-
-This was\ldots{}very hard.
-
-\textbf{Interlude: The Hardest Letter He Ever Wrote}
+\chapter{Interlude: The Hardest Letter}\label{chapter-36-interlude-the-hardest-letter}
 
 \emph{Lily:}
 
@@ -23765,16 +23556,7 @@ Regards,
 
 \emph{Harry.}
 
-\chapter{*Chapter 37*: Decus}\label{chapter-37-decus}
-
-Thank you for the responses to the Interlude!
-
-And this chapter tonight, since I won't be able to post tomorrow.
-Um\ldots{}well, I know the story is called {Freedom and Not Peace}, but
-Harry needed to get a bit of a break, or he would have collapsed. And,
-look, it advances the plot, even!
-
-\textbf{Chapter Thirty: Decus}
+\chapter{Decus}\label{chapter-37-decus}
 
 Harry let out a long, shivering breath, and closed his eyes.
 
@@ -25255,14 +25037,7 @@ this} staring\emph{, and then I won't fail anyone.}
 \emph{At least that didn't take as long as I thought it would. Now, I
 can get more things done this afternoon.}
 
-\chapter{*Chapter 39*: The Last Day
-Before}\label{chapter-39-the-last-day-before}
-
-Thank you for the reviews on the last chapter!
-
-Warning: this is painful. But it's better it happened now than later.
-
-\textbf{Chapter Thirty-Two: The Last Day Before}
+\chapter{The Last Day Before}\label{chapter-39-the-last-day-before}
 
 ``Who's that from?''
 
@@ -25978,16 +25753,7 @@ can see.}
 Harry let out a deep sigh, and, for the first time in far too many days,
 relaxed.
 
-\chapter{*Chapter 40*: Wildest of Them
-All}\label{chapter-40-wildest-of-them-all}
-
-Thank you for the reviews on the last chapter!
-
-I am not not \emph{entirely} happy with this chapter, because it did not
-turn out the way I originally envisioned it. But hopefully it will still
-be enjoyable.
-
-\textbf{Chapter Thirty-Three: Wildest of Them All}
+\chapter{Wildest of Them All}\label{chapter-40-wildest-of-them-all}
 
 He had been right the first time, Draco thought, once he was awake
 enough to think coherently. This \emph{had} to stop.
@@ -26945,17 +26711,7 @@ safe.
 \emph{Those problems will most definitely be solved somehow, because
 there's no way in hell I'm giving this up. Or him.}
 
-\chapter{*Chapter 41*: Serpent's
-Strike}\label{chapter-41-serpents-strike}
-
-Thank you for all the responses on the last chapter!
-
-A somewhat bouncy chapter. Well, kind of. Various characters do get
-whacked on the head.
-
-gets out mallet
-
-\textbf{Chapter Thirty-Four: Serpent's Strike}
+\chapter{Serpent's Strike}\label{chapter-41-serpents-strike}
 
 ``But what's the matter?'' Blaise asked innocently, waving the
 \emph{Daily Prophet} in Harry's face. ``I would have thought you'd be
@@ -27622,8 +27378,7 @@ teasing him until he does. And besides, his crush might reciprocate his
 feelings. I think he'd be happier then. He seems pretty damn serious
 about this.}
 
-\chapter{Intermission: Two Conversations}\label{chapter-42-intermission-two-conversations}
-
+\chapter{Intermission: Two Conversations}\label{chapter-42-intermission-two-conversations} 
 ``Well, I did it.''
 
 Draco raised his head and glared over his shoulder at Blaise as he
@@ -27894,8 +27649,7 @@ Albus sighed again and opened his eyes. \emph{It will have to. Matters
 cannot go on as they have been. And I will send him warning. On his head
 be it if he chooses to ignore the warning.}
 
-\chapter{A Deep and Tangled Tale}\label{chapter-43-a-deep-and-tangled-tale}
-
+\chapter{A Deep and Tangled Tale}\label{chapter-43-a-deep-and-tangled-tale} 
 \emph{Harry dreamed.}
 
 ``Evan.'' Voldemort's voice was unmistakable by now, and Harry didn't
@@ -28611,14 +28365,7 @@ It was pleasant to know that, when forced to commit instead of watch and
 wait and hover between decisions as he liked to do, he had chosen the
 winning side.
 
-\chapter{*Chapter 44*: Meleager's
-Fire}\label{chapter-44-meleagers-fire}
-
-Thank you for the responses on the last chapter!
-
-I really like this one.
-
-\textbf{Chapter Thirty-Six: Meleager's Fire}
+\chapter{Meleager's Fire}\label{chapter-44-meleagers-fire}
 
 The day hadn't been too bad, Harry thought, as he lay in bed that night.
 Millicent had reported back to him that she'd been making progress with
@@ -29694,19 +29441,7 @@ still to be in danger of his unbalancing power.
 fulfillment will come soon. I am sorry, Severus, Harry, but I cannot
 allow you to do what you could so easily do, together.}
 
-\chapter{*Chapter 45*: Dancing With
-Luna}\label{chapter-45-dancing-with-luna}
-
-Thank you for the reviews yesterday!
-
-A couple notes about this chapter, which \textbf{please read:} This is
-the first of three Christmas chapters. This particular one has an
-almighty cliffhanger at the end of it. \textbf{I mean it.} I decided to
-do this for what I think are good stylistic reasons, which you'll
-probably understand when you read it. If you don't like cliffhangers,
-read only up until the last scene break. \textbf{I mean it.}
-
-\textbf{Chapter Thirty-Seven: Dancing With Luna}
+\chapter{Dancing With Luna}\label{chapter-45-dancing-with-luna}
 
 Another of Lily's letters came at dinner on Christmas Eve.
 
@@ -30575,16 +30310,7 @@ managed the spell.
 
 Lily gazed at him, and said, ``Hello, Harry.''
 
-\chapter{*Chapter 46*: A Dark Lord Will Be
-Along}\label{chapter-46-a-dark-lord-will-be-along}
-
-Thank you for the reviews on the last chapter!
-
-This chapter horrifies me. It \emph{does} get better after this, I
-promise, and this time, Harry has people with him who can help him
-immediately.
-
-\textbf{Chapter Thirty-Eight: A Dark Lord Will Be Along Any Minute Now}
+\chapter{A Dark Lord Will Be Along}\label{chapter-46-a-dark-lord-will-be-along}
 
 Albus looked down from the window in his office, charmed to reflect the
 view of the gate through the rose-gardens as it was at the moment, and
@@ -31258,18 +30984,9 @@ Harry shiver in shock, and Draco tighten his hold on him.
 At his window, Albus Dumbledore leaned his forehead on the glass and
 shut his eyes in utter despair.
 
-\chapter{*Chapter 47*: Dark Yule}\label{chapter-47-dark-yule}
-
-Thank you for the reviews on the last chapter!
+\chapter{Dark Yule}\label{chapter-47-dark-yule} 
 
-I will not be updating tomorrow, due to other committments, though an
-Interlude should be along before too long.
-
-Chapter Thirty-Nine: Dark Yule
-
-\textbf{}
-
-\textbf{}Harry knew that he could collapse if he let himself. There were
+Harry knew that he could collapse if he let himself. There were
 too many thoughts in his head. They were drifting in bladed circles that
 would spring open in swords in a few moments, and pierce him.
 
@@ -32183,15 +31900,7 @@ several of them, while they responded by trying to bite his fingers off.
 For some reason, Harry found, he really liked watching Draco when his
 eyes were bright and he was animated like that.
 
-\chapter{*Chapter 48*: Interlude: SelfRecording
-Pensieves}\label{chapter-48-interlude-selfrecording-pensieves}
-
-Thank you for the reviews on the last chapter!
-
-Just a reminder that I won't be updating tomorrow, due to other
-committments.
-
-\textbf{Interlude: Self-Recording Pensieves}
+\chapter{Interlude: SelfRecording Pensieves}\label{chapter-48-interlude-selfrecording-pensieves}
 
 \emph{Jane Blane}
 
@@ -32237,14 +31946,7 @@ I am,
 
 \emph{Hogwarts School of Witchcraft and Wizardry}.
 
-\chapter{*Chapter 49*: Election Day}\label{chapter-49-election-day}
-
-Thank you for the responses on the last chapter!
-
-This chapter has an election, and a bit of a step forward for Snape and
-Harry.
-
-\textbf{Chapter Forty: Election Day}
+\chapter{Election Day}\label{chapter-49-election-day} 
 
 The Muggles had never been able to see the last tower in the Tower of
 London, where the Ministry had kept its voting owls for four hundred
@@ -32928,7 +32630,7 @@ Ministry.''
 Amelia laughed at him. Rufus didn't see why. It really \emph{was} his
 Ministry, now, and people had to learn that he had no truck with Lords.
 
-\chapter{Spikes in the Head}\label{chapter-50-spikes-in-the-head}
+\chapter{Spikes in the Head}\label{chapter-50-spikes-in-the-head} 
 
 ``I can't do it.'' Weasley's whining voice grated on the ears, Draco
 thought, as he sat on one of the desks and swung his legs back and
@@ -33643,7 +33345,7 @@ have any compunctions.''
 
 He shut the door hard behind him on his way out.
 
-\chapter{Neither Snape Nor Harry}\label{chapter-51-neither-snape-nor-harry}
+\chapter{Neither Snape Nor Harry}\label{chapter-51-neither-snape-nor-harry} 
 
 \emph{You must tread carefully.}
 
@@ -34368,15 +34070,7 @@ seeing, he has to be unconvinced.}
 Harry gently put \emph{Light Lady and Dark Lord} back into its place,
 and then strode from the library towards the Ancient Runes classroom.
 
-\chapter{*Chapter 52*: They Are
-Dancing}\label{chapter-52-they-are-dancing}
-
-Thank you for the reviews on the last chapter!
-
-And Draco does what Draco would do in this chapter, since he's himself,
-and knows Harry, and is also very Stubborn.
-
-\textbf{Chapter Forty-Three: They Are Dancing}
+\chapter{They Are Dancing}\label{chapter-52-they-are-dancing}
 
 Draco sighed as he finished the last rune drawing. He \emph{did} enjoy
 this class, but sometimes the tiny, endless, complicated variations on
@@ -35105,18 +34799,7 @@ and look at Draco.
 
 Draco was smiling at him. There was summer in his eyes.
 
-\chapter{*Chapter 53*: Intermission:
-Glances}\label{chapter-53-intermission-glances}
-
-Thank you for the reviews on the last chapter!
-
-Um, yes. Chapterlette, again, containing small and scattered scenes that
-I could not tuck into the next chapter. That means the next chapter will
-be later than I planned on, but I am going to start writing it the
-moment I'm done posting this one. At least if you waited up late for the
-chapter, you'll have this to much on before going to bed.
-
-\textbf{Intermission: Glances}
+\chapter{Intermission: Glances}\label{chapter-53-intermission-glances}
 
 Millicent glanced up from her book as the door to the Slytherin common
 room opened and Harry and Draco came through. She could barely see
@@ -35379,18 +35062,7 @@ Narcissa had been good politics, but that was not the reason he was
 filled with fierce delight whenever she wanted to go to bed. That was
 all, and only, her.
 
-\chapter{*Chapter 54*: A Moment Between
-Brothers}\label{chapter-54-a-moment-between-brothers}
-
-Um.
-
-The story changed its mind again. Oh, this will chapter will still
-\emph{fit} with the ones to follow it, but it does so in a radically
-different way.
-
-stares at story
-
-\textbf{Chapter Forty-Four: A Moment Between Brothers}
+\chapter{A Moment Between Brothers}\label{chapter-54-a-moment-between-brothers}
 
 Harry sighed and shifted back until he sat on the edge of the single
 long table that was the only furniture in this particular abandoned
@@ -36082,7 +35754,7 @@ excited shrieks around him.
 \emph{And why the hell the gray web in the water was wavering, and what
 Dumbledore knows about it.}
 
-\chapter{A Man's Soul May Waver}\label{chapter-55-a-mans-soul-may-waver}
+\chapter{A Man's Soul May Waver}\label{chapter-55-a-mans-soul-may-waver} 
 
 Harry wondered what he \emph{should} be feeling as he followed Snape,
 who was levitating Rabastan, into the Great Hall, and as Draco tagged
@@ -36732,14 +36404,7 @@ him even if he did.
 
 \emph{It is time to make it clear where we stand.}
 
-\chapter{*Chapter 56*: Harry's Stake}\label{chapter-56-harrys-stake}
-
-Thank you for the reviews on the last chapter!
-
-This is late because it's the longest chapter I've ever written, plus
-eleven thousand words. Stupid monster chapter.
-
-\textbf{Chapter Forty-Six: Harry's Stake}
+\chapter{Harry's Stake}\label{chapter-56-harrys-stake} 
 
 Draco had followed everyone else to the hospital wing, though he'd
 lingered behind out of necessity. Harry's distress reached across the
@@ -38041,7 +37706,7 @@ Slowly, imperceptibly, he relaxed.
 
 \emph{Maybe it's not such a bad thing, being seen.}
 
-\chapter{Interlude: Shall I Offer Thee}\label{chapter-57-interlude-shall-i-offer-thee}
+\chapter{Interlude: Shall I Offer Thee}\label{chapter-57-interlude-shall-i-offer-thee} 
 
 \noindent \emph{February 22nd, 1995}
 
@@ -38091,7 +37756,7 @@ With all the regards of self-interest,
 
 \emph{Evan Rosier.}
 
-\chapter{The Bloody Bed}\label{chapter-58-the-bloody-bed}
+\chapter{The Bloody Bed}\label{chapter-58-the-bloody-bed} 
 
 \noindent \emph{February 22nd, 1995}
 
@@ -38885,7 +38550,7 @@ we'll lay down our lives for you.}
 \emph{Whether you want us to or not. You've got yourself allies, Harry
 Potter, and we don't intend to let you go.}
 
-\chapter{Irrevocably Changed}\label{chapter-59-irrevocably-changed}
+\chapter{Irrevocably Changed}\label{chapter-59-irrevocably-changed} 
 
 ``Your magic feels less powerful,'' was the first thing Draco announced
 the next morning.
@@ -39942,17 +39607,7 @@ Seers and their superstitious nonsense! It's not enough to have to
 listen to Trelawney's babbling at the head table, now I have to do it in
 my own office\ldots{}}
 
-\chapter{*Chapter 60*: Must You Remind
-Everyone}\label{chapter-60-must-you-remind-everyone}
-
-Thank you for the reviews on the last chapter!
-
-And this chapter proves the story can sometimes be light, after
-all.\textbf{\\
-}
-
-\textbf{Chapter Forty-Nine: Must You Remind Everyone That You Are a
-Parselmouth?}
+\chapter{Must You Remind Everyone}\label{chapter-60-must-you-remind-everyone}
 
 Harry was very pleased with himself when he shut his eyes that night in
 the third week of March. He had had another guarded conversation with
@@ -40730,7 +40385,7 @@ He closed his eyes, and smiled.
 
 That was all that needed to happen right now.
 
-\chapter{Demands, and Harry}\label{chapter-61-demands-and-harry}
+\chapter{Demands, and Harry}\label{chapter-61-demands-and-harry} 
 
 \emph{Harry dreamed.}
 
@@ -41554,14 +41209,7 @@ people give me power, even if it's a fickle, changeable power, they do
 it by their own choice, and they take it away by choice, too. I ought to
 use my fame to benefit my allies as much as I can.}
 
-\chapter{*Chapter 62*: Troubled the
-Twilight}\label{chapter-62-troubled-the-twilight}
-
-Thank you for the reviews last chapter!
-
-And Harry finds out he's stirred a hornets' nest here.
-
-\textbf{Chapter Fifty-One: Troubled the Twilight}
+\chapter{Troubled the Twilight}\label{chapter-62-troubled-the-twilight}
 
 Millicent waited, patiently, her hands linked together on her lap. Both
 her parents would have been proud of her, she thought. Mother would have
@@ -42198,12 +41846,7 @@ Harry remembered his scar, but he was so exhausted---as much by the
 thought of the future as by the thought of the present---that he curled
 up and took Regulus's advice.
 
-\chapter{*Chapter 63*: Interlude: Son of
-Mine}\label{chapter-63-interlude-son-of-mine}
-
-I like this interlude.
-
-\textbf{Interlude: Son of Mine}
+\chapter{Interlude: Son of Mine}\label{chapter-63-interlude-son-of-mine}
 
 \emph{February 22nd, 1995}
 
@@ -42577,15 +42220,7 @@ Sincerely,
 
 \emph{James Potter.}
 
-\chapter{*Chapter 64*: Walking on
-Eggshells}\label{chapter-64-walking-on-eggshells}
-
-Thank you for the reviews yesterday!
-
-Warning: Slight cliffhanger on this chapter. Also, a bunch of different
-emotions.
-
-\textbf{Chapter Fifty-Two: Walking on Eggshells}
+\chapter{Walking on Eggshells}\label{chapter-64-walking-on-eggshells}
 
 Harry stretched his hands above his head, and tried to ignore Draco's
 gaze burning on the side of his face.
@@ -43321,18 +42956,7 @@ corridors, and opened the right door.
 In the room before him, glittering, silver-edged, he felt the Maze's
 alien awareness open one eye.
 
-\chapter{*Chapter 65*: May The Maze Be
-Unending}\label{chapter-65-may-the-maze-be-unending}
-
-Thank you for the responses on the last chapter!
-
-Um. I didn't mean to finish this whole chapter, but I did, so it's being
-posted tonight. That means that there will be no chapter tomorrow,
-because I'm traveling.
-
-Also, I need to recover from this. My god.
-
-\textbf{Chapter Fifty-Three: May The Maze Be Unending}
+\chapter{May The Maze Be Unending}\label{chapter-65-may-the-maze-be-unending}
 
 Harry felt sunlight on his face, sunlight shining on his skin, sunlight
 all around him, as he stepped into the room where the Maze waited. He
@@ -43981,14 +43605,7 @@ up young trees in place of the vanquished old ones.
 At the moment, at least, the world was heavy with possibility, vivid and
 young and full of the morning.
 
-\chapter{*Chapter 66*: Expanding the
-Covenant}\label{chapter-66-expanding-the-covenant}
-
-Thank you for the reviews on the last chapter!
-
-And my god, the story is being \emph{bouncy} again.
-
-\textbf{Chapter Fifty-Four: Expanding the Covenant}
+\chapter{Expanding the Covenant}\label{chapter-66-expanding-the-covenant}
 
 Snape did not like to think of how much the past two days had hurt him,
 when the term began again and Harry was not there for it.
@@ -44702,7 +44319,7 @@ and going mad, and couldn't identify it. ``\emph{How}?''
 like the smug bastard he was, and then ushered him ahead of him and out
 of the Ministry, refusing to answer any more questions.
 
-\chapter{Down, and Down, and Down}\label{chapter-67-down-and-down-and-down}
+\chapter{Down, and Down, and Down}\label{chapter-67-down-and-down-and-down} 
 
 \emph{Harry dreamed.}
 
@@ -45776,15 +45393,7 @@ grass. ``The night isn't done yet.'' He felt a smile breaking across his
 face in spite of himself, as the magic went to work on making him happy.
 ``Let's dance.''
 
-\chapter{*Chapter 68*: Intermission: After the
-Dancing}\label{chapter-68-intermission-after-the-dancing}
-
-Thank you for the reviews on the last chapter!
-
-Another chapterlette, born from the need to clarify some of what people
-saw during Chapter 55.
-
-\textbf{Intermission: After the Dancing}
+\chapter{Intermission: After the Dancing}\label{chapter-68-intermission-after-the-dancing}
 
 Draco did find himself enjoying Walpurgis, though the first memory to
 enter his head was of a Parselmouth raising basilisks, and it startled
@@ -46218,15 +45827,7 @@ be helped, and they would heal in time. At least they had left by the
 time she finished writing her letter, sent it to Lucius, and sat down to
 watch her face in the mirror and comb her hair.
 
-\chapter{*Chapter 69*: Laying the
-Ground}\label{chapter-69-laying-the-ground}
-
-Thank you for the reviews on the last chapter!
-
-Sorry this one is so late. I need to start getting to bed earlier, so
-I'm not too tired to write.
-
-\textbf{Chapter Fifty-Six: Laying the Ground}
+\chapter{Laying the Ground}\label{chapter-69-laying-the-ground}
 
 Harry laid down his quill and blew across the ink of his notes to dry
 them. Then he sat back and looked carefully at the scroll.
@@ -47034,14 +46635,7 @@ As for Hawthorn\ldots{}
 binding me from going after Dumbledore,} she thought, and bared her
 teeth to the moonlight.
 
-\chapter{*Chapter 70*: Blood of the
-Basilisk}\label{chapter-70-blood-of-the-basilisk}
-
-Thank you for the reviews on the last chapter!
-
-Damn, this was \emph{fun} to write.
-
-\textbf{Chapter Fifty-Seven: Blood of the Basilisk}
+\chapter{Blood of the Basilisk}\label{chapter-70-blood-of-the-basilisk}
 
 ``It will do?''
 
@@ -47802,15 +47396,7 @@ selfish holding back.
 Harry slipped into sleep, fully aware that he would be smiling. There
 could be no better cause for tiring himself out than this.
 
-\chapter{*Chapter 71*: Interlude: And Soaring Ever
-Singest}\label{chapter-71-interlude-and-soaring-ever-singest}
-
-Thank you for the reviews on Chapter 57!
-
-The underlined words quoted here are from Percy Shelley's ``To a
-Skylark.''
-
-\textbf{Interlude: And Soaring Ever Singest}
+\chapter{Interlude: And Soaring Ever Singest}\label{chapter-71-interlude-and-soaring-ever-singest}
 
 \emph{June 1st, 1995}
 
@@ -47866,15 +47452,7 @@ In the game,
 
 \emph{Evan Rosier.}
 
-\chapter{*Chapter 72*: One Sacrifice Too
-Many}\label{chapter-72-one-sacrifice-too-many}
-
-Thank you for the reviews on the last chapter!
-
-This chapter is\ldots{}odd. It is not really the way I wanted it to turn
-out. It is weird, and too conscious. But it does what it has to do.
-
-\textbf{Chapter Fifty-Eight: One Sacrifice Too Many}
+\chapter{One Sacrifice Too Many}\label{chapter-72-one-sacrifice-too-many}
 
 Draco leaned against the wall outside the classroom door and waited
 patiently. He could have gone into the room and been closer to Harry,
@@ -48775,16 +48353,7 @@ expanded to batter at the inside of Harry's skull.
 \emph{I rather like Draco self-satisfied,} Harry thought, as they walked
 back to the dungeons together.
 
-\chapter{*Chapter 73*: First
-Guardian}\label{chapter-73-first-guardian}
-
-Thank you for the reviews on the last chapter!
-
-Note: This is a highly non-linear chapter. It's also very, very
-unpleasant, but it's necessary to let you know what Snape's been doing
-these last few months, and where he is now.
-
-\textbf{Chapter Fifty-Nine: First Guardian and Last Line of Defense}
+\chapter{First Guardian}\label{chapter-73-first-guardian}
 
 Snape sat down slowly. He had become very good at putting off this
 moment, this necessary but horrible part of his day. He would mark
@@ -49367,17 +48936,7 @@ away and reverse his progress, even if Harry wants me to.}
 \emph{Better he hate me and be able to laugh like that than to love me
 and be silent.}
 
-\chapter{*Chapter 74*: Intermission: Five
-Months}\label{chapter-74-intermission-five-months}
-
-Originally, this was a chapter proper. Then I discovered that I didn't
-have enough information for a full chapter, and determined to give just
-five scenes, which should tell you what Dumbledore's been up to all this
-time\ldots{}
-
-And prime the whole thing for detonation.
-
-\textbf{Intermission: Five Months}
+\chapter{Intermission: Five Months}\label{chapter-74-intermission-five-months}
 
 \emph{February}
 
@@ -49714,24 +49273,7 @@ Albus went on to breakfast, his stride firm and sure. It had cost him
 some uncertainty and some standing in the eyes of the wizarding world,
 but he was back in the game.
 
-\chapter{*Chapter 75*: Day of Longest
-Light}\label{chapter-75-day-of-longest-light}
-
-Thank you for the reviews on the last chapter.
-
-\textbf{Important note, please read}: With this chapter, ``Freedom and
-Not Peace'' begins heading into its climax. It will end on Chapter 70.
-This means, among other things, that this chapter ends in a
-\textbf{MASSIVE FREAKING CLIFFHANGER}, and so do the two chapters after
-it. Things also take an extremely dark turn after this chapter. If you
-don't like cliffhangers, or if you don't like suspense stretched across
-days, you might want to wait a while to read. I don't mind. (I'm also
-expecting a lot of people to simply \emph{quit} reading after Chapter
-61, so there's that).
-
-Otherwise, enjoy! This massive bastard of a story is almost through.
-
-\textbf{Chapter Sixty: Day of Longest Light}
+\chapter{Day of Longest Light}\label{chapter-75-day-of-longest-light}
 
 \emph{A full year ago today}, Harry thought in wonder, as he, and James,
 and Connor, walked to the edge of the Northumberland beach with their
@@ -50480,29 +50022,7 @@ hasn't forsaken his old allegiance after all. He was their sleeper.}
 He did not doubt that he was going to the Death Eaters, and Voldemort.
 Grimly, Harry began preparing himself for what he would find there.
 
-\chapter{*Chapter 76*: Crucio, and Worse Than
-Crucio}\label{chapter-76-crucio-and-worse-than-crucio}
-
-Thank you for the reviews on the last chapter!
-
-I know I said at one point that the end of of ``No Mouth But Some
-Serpent's'' was the darkest chapter set I would ever write. Um. I lied.
-Um.
-
-This chapter is very nasty. It is disgusting. It is the reason for the
-\textbf{eventual severe gore} warning at the beginning of the story. It
-once again carries a MASSIVE FREAKING CLIFFHANGER. And it is not the end
-of the darkness. It begins a stretch of painful chapters that don't let
-up until Chapter 70.
-
-I'll understand if people either want to wait to read it for a few days,
-or quit reading the story. I mean it. I didn't know how bad it was going
-to be when I started writing it. This hurts.
-
-With all due warning, now it begins. \textbf{\\
-}
-
-\textbf{Chapter Sixty-One: \emph{Crucio}, and Worse Than \emph{Crucio}}
+\chapter{Crucio, and Worse Than Crucio}\label{chapter-76-crucio-and-worse-than-crucio}
 
 Harry was ready when the Portkey deposited him and Karkaroff into the
 middle of some cool, dark place, obviously far from Hogwarts. He reached
@@ -51316,23 +50836,7 @@ sickened by his own folly in not controlling his wandless magic some
 other way, the part that had opened the cage and let the fury out---was
 fiercely glad of it.
 
-\chapter{*Chapter 77*: Deep Death
-Waits}\label{chapter-77-deep-death-waits}
-
-Thank you again for the reviews on Chapter 61!
-
-This chapter once again has a MASSIVE FREAKING CLIFFHANGER, but it is
-the last one in a row that does. Also, fic warnings are relevant again,
-especially the one about emotional upset, and Harry's, um, kind of not
-sane right now.
-
-I assume that I will probably be posting another chapter tomorrow, but
-later in the evening.
-
-The title of this chapter comes from a line in Swinburne's poem, ``Hymn
-to Proserpine.''
-
-\textbf{Chapter Sixty-Two: Deep Death Waits}
+\chapter{Deep Death Waits}\label{chapter-77-deep-death-waits}
 
 \emph{I never knew,} Harry thought, as he stepped away from the altar
 and approached Voldemort with his wand clutched tightly in his hand,
@@ -51922,7 +51426,7 @@ graveyard and start hurting other people.}
 
 \emph{Yes, I think I can do that. I'm already a murderer, aren't I?}
 
-\chapter{Of Hedges and Plains of Ice}\label{chapter-78-of-hedges-and-plains-of-ice}
+\chapter{Of Hedges and Plains of Ice}\label{chapter-78-of-hedges-and-plains-of-ice} 
 
 Harry found himself standing in cold darkness. He shivered and squinted,
 expecting that at any moment he would grow warmer, or the light would
@@ -52631,14 +52135,7 @@ Harry shook his head slightly, and let his right arm rest on
 Dragonsbane's floating corpse, and Disapparated them all, Harry and body
 and phoenix, with a crack.
 
-\chapter{*Chapter 79*: All Fall Down}\label{chapter-79-all-fall-down}
-
-Thank you for the reviews yesterday!
-
-This is not the darkest chapter of this walking-through-hell part of the
-book, but it does have the worst case of Murphy's Law.
-
-\textbf{Chapter Sixty-Four: All Fall Down}
+\chapter{All Fall Down}\label{chapter-79-all-fall-down} 
 
 Albus felt the pull of the boy's magic the moment he Apparated back to
 the outskirts of Hogsmeade.
@@ -53576,7 +53073,7 @@ that Midsummer night.
 \emph{No matter what else happens to me, I am still} vates\emph{. There
 is still that.}
 
-\chapter{Call It Compulsion, Call It Madness}\label{chapter-80-call-it-compulsion-call-it-madness}
+\chapter{Call It Compulsion, Call It Madness}\label{chapter-80-call-it-compulsion-call-it-madness} 
 
 Albus frowned slightly. It seemed that his compulsion had not been as
 successful as he would have liked. Nightfall, and Harry had fled outside
@@ -54399,7 +53896,7 @@ struggle with the boy's will, but the mist had slipped in through the
 cracks in Harry's emotional exhaustion and uncertainty. The compulsion
 had worked.
 
-\chapter{Harry and Lily}\label{chapter-81-harry-and-lily}
+\chapter{Harry and Lily}\label{chapter-81-harry-and-lily} 
 
 \emph{``Mr. Potter.}''
 
@@ -55064,7 +54561,7 @@ more courageous or Dumbledore any wiser. They have to stop.}
 
 \emph{And that means that I have to go have a little talk with Draco.}
 
-\chapter{Only Forward}\label{chapter-82-only-forward}
+\chapter{Only Forward}\label{chapter-82-only-forward} 
 
 Harry met Draco in the hallway outside the hospital wing. Draco had a
 worried look on his face, but, to Harry's surprise, it didn't relax into
@@ -55750,16 +55247,7 @@ head all the same. This time, its message was unmistakable.
 
 \emph{Come to us.}
 
-\chapter{*Chapter 83*: A Toy and a
-Coin}\label{chapter-83-a-toy-and-a-coin}
-
-Thank you for the reviews on the last chapter!
-
-This chapter once again carries a gore warning. Don't worry; the gore
-doesn't happen to Harry, and, in fact, not to anyone that most people
-care about. Nevertheless, this is Not a Nice Chapter for that one scene.
-
-\textbf{Chapter Sixty-Eight: A Toy and a Coin}
+\chapter{A Toy and a Coin}\label{chapter-83-a-toy-and-a-coin}
 
 \emph{Harry? Harry, I found my body!}
 
@@ -56380,7 +55868,7 @@ She wondered whom he would swear vengeance against.
 
 She hoped she would get to watch him exact it.
 
-\chapter{Trying Again}\label{chapter-84-trying-again}
+\chapter{Trying Again}\label{chapter-84-trying-again} 
 
 Snape's world had become a blur of Pensieve memories, of writing so that
 his fingers were splashed with ink as they usually were with crushed
@@ -56985,15 +56473,7 @@ fruition and Harry heard of it, he stepped onto his road.
 
 \emph{Neither of us were born for the easy way.}
 
-\chapter{*Chapter 85*: Interlude: The
-Invitation}\label{chapter-85-interlude-the-invitation}
-
-Thank you for the responses to the last chapter!
-
-This is just a short little interlude, but it should give you some idea
-of the storm that's coming.
-
-\textbf{Interlude: The Invitation}
+\chapter{Interlude: The Invitation}\label{chapter-85-interlude-the-invitation}
 
 \emph{To: Peter Pettigrew}
 
@@ -57030,23 +56510,7 @@ I remain, sir,
 
 \emph{Severus Snape.}
 
-\chapter{*Chapter 86*: The Clear Sea For
-Miles}\label{chapter-86-the-clear-sea-for-miles}
-
-This is the last chapter of `Freedom and Not Peace.' A great and
-powerful thanks to everyone who has enjoyed the story and come along to
-see it finished. The next story, `Wind That Shakes The Sea and Stars,'
-Harry's fifth year and the AU of OoTP, will begin on either Thursday or
-Friday, depending on where you live. And it is even LONGER. Aren't you
-lucky.
-
-The title of this chapter is a line from Swinburne's poem{ Tristram of
-Lyonesse}, his version of the Tristan and Isolde story (written because
-he thought Tennyson was Not Doing It Right).
-
-Bye for a few days!
-
-\textbf{Chapter Seventy: The Clear Sea For Miles On Glimmering Miles}
+\chapter{The Clear Sea For Miles}\label{chapter-86-the-clear-sea-for-miles} 
 
 Harry woke with a gasp. He wondered, for a moment, as he lay panting on
 the hospital bed, whether Voldemort had returned to his full strength